Hello blog! We had yet another successful group meeting this last Wednsday, and I wanted to share some of the feedback my group gave me. I really appreciated the commentary that was made, because it pertained to our script.
- Make the lines more realistic
- Change the reasoning for Tom not wanting to shake people's hands
- Make the ending more subtle
Originally, our plan was to make Tom's fear of shaking people's hands stem from something like social anxiety or just plain sensitivity to physical touch. However, my group and I agreed that this reason wouldn't really have a comedic effect to it, and can actually be a serious topic for some people. Therefore, we changed the reason to something a lot more silly and typical to a comedy movie or show. I don't want to give away this change just yet, but I will be posting the finalized script soon that will have it. Stay tuned...
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