Critical reflection

        

In our documentary "Conventions of art", the main social group represented is artists part of one of the unconventional art forms, specifically street art. At first, our plan was to represent both a tattoo artist and street artist to show the different and same aspects that come with both "unconventional" art forms. For instance, how they can both be seen as a less classy form of art, compared to the typical museum art. Our documentary ended up only focusing on a high school student named Kyle, who has been in the graffiti and street art world for most of his life. He mainly expresses his art in his numerous sketchbooks throughout the years, as well as occasionally around our local city with a secret tag. As Kyle mentions throughout the documentary, an important aspect he specifically asked us to represent is how the stigma around street art can be painted as negative, and the impressive aspects behind it can be erased. Often, street art in films is represented as careless spray painting and vandalizing private property. For instance, a common game that our generation grew up with is called “Subway surfers”, and it involves a character running away from a cop after “vandalizing” an old train with spray paint. This is an example of the typical representation our generation gets for street art and graffiti. The questions we chose to ask Kyle aimed to express graffiti as a legitimate art form of its own. We contributed to this by making most of our B-roll shots Kyle simply flipping through his many sketchbooks and explaining the story and meaning behind all his art. He talked about the inspiration he felt when drawing certain designs, the nostalgia behind some of his notebooks, the inspiration of his tag, etc. This genuine dialogue helped contribute to the representation of street art in a way that stems from emotion and inspiration, rather than a place of wanting to vandalize. This also helped the audience to sympathize with him as a regular high school boy who is into his art, rather than a criminal. 

We used numerous techniques to engage our audience in the documentary, such as lighting, editing styles, and music. We attempted to make our interview more engaging to watch by setting up two different camera angles for it, one from his side and one in front of him. We continued to switch between these two angles during the interview to add variety and keep the audience engaged. However, looking back, this was poorly executed, since the second angle was too much of a side profile, and did not have a pleasant background, but rather a cluttered one. Our teacher and peers also agreed that this would have been a good angle to keep out, or in the future angle it better with a different background. The lighting we set up during this interview was purposefully blue. We thought that this best encapsulated Kyle’s typical art style, which includes a lot of blues and vibrant colors. We had also asked him in advance which color he thought would best reflect himself and his journey with art, and he chose blue. Whether it was subconsciously or noticed, this lighting helped engage the audience, because it wasn’t typical, boring fluorescent lighting, and it added to the visual of the interview in a subtle way. The music we had throughout the different parts of the documentary was specifically chosen in order to add context for the audience and bring life to Kyle’s words and the different B-roll and interview clips. For example, when Kyle started talking about how his art is heavily influenced by his Brazilian culture, we started to play a traditional Brazilian song to show the audience a taste of the world being talked about.  

Some typical conventions of a documentary that we chose to exclude, and therefore challenge, are things like narration to add context and an introduction to the documentary. We decided to start the documentary with Kyle immediately speaking, which was a way to immediately engage the audience. However, our research in class watching numerous documentaries inspired us when it came to the interview process. Like the documentaries “Exit through the gift shop” and “The American promise”, we interviewed our subject by giving him broad questions that he could expand on, and excluding our voice from the interview, so it seemed like he was speaking to the audience. The different sound bites and pieces of music we used throughout the interview helped prevent the “talking head” effect that we were advised against and therefore kept things interesting for the viewers. Had we not included these various editing techniques, Kyle’s words may have been lost and not understood as clearly as we wanted them to be.  

  

Production pt.1

 A few days after we got all of the B-roll shots, it was time to start on the hard part of any documentary. Interviews. 

    Again, sorry to mention the Banksy documentary for the 100th time, but we really did feel inspired by a lot of aspects of it, and one of it was the interview style. Something that stood out to me in the documentary was the room and lighting in which Banksy was filmed, because I thought it embodied the vibe of street art extremely well in a seamless way. 



We took inspiration from this unique set and backdrop and asked Kyle a color he felt like would most embody his style of art, and he said blue. This is why we made the choice to frame Kyle with blue lights, and have the background as his living room table where he typically sketches his art. 




    In terms of editing, we decided to include two different interview angles, and therefore set up two different cameras. Looking back, this was very poorly executed, because the second angle was very awkward and showed too much of his side profile. We are likely going to re-edit this and only leave in one angle even though that's not the effect we were going for. 

    Another important aspect of the production process was the footage we chose to include in the documentary. After interviewing Kyle, we had upwards of 30 minutes of footage of him talking, which had to be cut down to about five minutes. In order to decide on the most vital parts, we asked Kyle what was most important for him to portray in the interviews. He responded that he wanted to break the stigma behind street artists, which is that they can be "trashy", and how certain people can ruin the reputation of actual artists like himself. 


Production

     On our first day of starting to film the documentary, we decided it would be a good idea to dedicate an entire filming session to collecting a ton of B-roll. Like I mentioned in my previous blog post about pre-production planning, we took a lot of inspiration from the Banksy documentary "Exit through the gift shop" about street art, which relied heavily on B-roll to portray the world of the street artist Thierry. 

    We started by asking Kyle to get out all of his old sketchbooks and Ipad that he draws on, which ended up being a huge pile of hundreds and hundreds of drawings. A big part of the B-roll process was sitting with Kyle and listening to the stories behind the different drawings and tags, which was one of the most interesting and enjoyable parts of filming. 



Kyle and his sketchbooks


    After we sorted through a couple of the sketchbooks, we decided to include drawings from two of them, and then B-roll of him creating art on his Ipad in real time so that the viewers can see what a drawing/planning process looks like for a street artist. We also made sure to mic him up in case he explained anything of importance while sorting through the drawings, that could end up as audio for another part of the documentary. 

    In order to capture multiple angles, me and Zain both used a camera. I used the tripod one shown in the picture, and Zain captured different handheld and close up shots for variety. 




This was the easier part of the filming process since B-roll requires less planning and is more about gathering a sufficient amount of footage to provide context in a documentary. The next day, we got started on the more tricky part which was interviews. 



More research/planning

     When we first started working on planning the documentary, my group member Zain told me about an idea she's had for a documentary on "unconventional art". Unconventional to us meant something that is often seen as trashy in society, basically the opposite of usual, classical museum art. We had the idea to highlight this less conventional form of art and paint them in a different light than usually talked about. 

    Like I said in my last blog post, we were definitely heavily influenced by the Banksy documentary. Although at first we were thinking to do a tattoo artist, we decided that a local street artist from our school would be more interesting. However, we still tried to get both interviews and wanted to somehow integrate both of their stories into one documentary. 

    When we presented this idea to our teacher, she told us that the two stories are too separate from each other and would not cohesively come together in one documentary, so she suggested that we either stick to one of them or make two separate documentaries. Since the interview with the tattoo artist did not schedule well, we decided to just stick to the documentary about Kyle, the street artist. 

Shortly after we stuck with this final idea, we started adding to this document and roughly planning elements of the documentary we wanted to include. Warning, ignore the unprofessional "blah blah blahs", this was just a rough outline to get us going in the direction of starting to film:

doc layout 

begins with random clips of graffiti and tattooing, (go out and get shots of random ppl) interviews with random ppl abt how it’s trashy blah blah blah  

my name is blah i’m a tattoo artist” 

my name is blah i’m a graffiti artist” 

reel of them doing their shit 

how they got into it/early years  

how they improved/hardships 

talk about how places have now been made to support this type of art (wynwood, celebrities, more tattoo shops) 

how they found a community that accepts them 

how they r as an artist now  

words of wisdom 

  1. The unconventional fields the subject artist originally got into and their initial experience  

  1. Information about not having a community that other widely accepted art forms had (VO w/background footage) 

  1. Interviews with artists about the isolation they felt and their passion for the art form 

 

  1. Introduction to the unconventional field, for example tattoo artists or graffiti.  

  1. Information about how subject discovered the art form (VO w/background footage) 

  1. Interviews asking artists about the process behind their work 

  1. Interviews asking artists about the limited community and recognition  

 

 

One of the main forms we are going to use are montages to show the different shots of the two artists' work. We’re going to piece together shots of the progress of tattooing and graffiti, and then show the variety of pieces they have created. These will be included throughout the documentary, as a break from the documentaries and to add more context.  

We are also going to narrate the documentary with a voiceover, during scenes when there is no interview. This will help to move the documentary along and explain different shots better.  

The documentary “Exit through the gift shop” inspired our choices the most. The technique of the montage, which the Banksy documentary both opened and closed with, was a great way to establish the context behind the documentary and show the different art forms. They included the same song within both montages, which is likely something we will take inspiration from as well. We would also like to include a large amount of B-roll within the documentary to show as much of the world as possible, which “Exit through a gift shop” relied on.  

  1. Close up of eyes while doing art  

 

2.  Close up grabbing spray paint 

 

3.  Close up of tattoo gun 

 

4. Extreme close up putting ink into dropper  

 

5. Medium of putting gloves on  

 

6. Medium putting hat on 

 

7. Opening ink bottles 

 

8. Cleaning station 

 

9. Setting up tools 

 

10. Tattoo stencil printing 

 

11. Installing tattoo stencil 

 

12. ink mixing 

 

13. Close up of nozzle being pressed 

 

14. Sketching design  

 

15. Paint dripping 

 

16. Spray can mist 

 

17. Adjusting mask 

 

18. Close up of shoes  

 

19. Cans being places on ground 

 

20. Complete Artwork 

 

 

Questions:  

p1: How the two ppl grew up 

What were your early years of life like? 

Were you an artistic kid?  

How did you do in school as a kid? 

How does your childhood family express themselves through art? 

P2: when/how they discovered their art form  

How did your culture influence this form of art? 

What activity did you do before this? 

Where did you first see this form of art? 

Explain how you discovered this art form? 

What piece inspired you to love this form of art? 

P3: How was the beginning of their passion? 

Were you always good from the start? 

What was the first piece you remember making  

What were you inspired by? 

P4: What made them passionate about their art form 

What other activities do you do for fun or even work? 

What made you decide that your art form was what you want to do 

Did you meet any people who helped you really love your passion 

P5: What did they do to improve  

How did you gain the determination to get really good at this? 

How have you improved over the years though self learning? 

How have you improved over the years though guidance? 

P6: how their art form is socially unexpected, how did they embrace it still 

How is your art form socially unacceptable 

How did you continue your passion knowing this  

How did you face backlash on continuing a career in this industry 

What was your initial reaction to the backlash, if negative, how did you change your opinion  

P7: What hardships did they face on the road to getting good at this  

What hardships did you face getting your name out? 

What hardships did you face getting good at this? 

What hardships have you faced outside your passion? 

How did you continue your passion even with this? 

P8: How did they express their emotions from what they were facing though this passion 

How have you expressed challenges you have faced through this passion? 

How does your art changed based on what you’re going through 

 

P9: How this made them who they are today 

How has your love for art shaped who you are today 

How has art changed you for the better 

Would you say art changed your life?  

How has circumstances in this field effected your character 

How has this field effect your appearance 

P10: How are they going to use their passion to do good in the world 

How have you used your love for this to improve others lives 

How to you plan on using your passion to do good in the world 

P11: What piece of advice would they give to someone starting out 

What piece of advice would you give your past self first starting out 

If you had a message about your form of art what would it be  

What would you say to someone who is trying to get into your art form 

 

 

Critical reflection

            In our documentary "Conventions of art", the main social group represented is artists part of one of the unconven...