Group meeting
On Tuesday, we were put into groups by Ms. Stoklosa in order to discuss our projects so far, and give each other advice that we may have. I explained to my group my science fiction film and the concept behind it, and here is some of the feedback I got.
My group seemed to think that my idea had a solid foundation, but they all agreed that it needed more substance to it. I explained to them the outline of my opening scene, which would be a girl writing equations that lead to time travel at her desk, but they all said that I would need to add more context to make the point of her work clear, and not just random equations. For example, one suggestion was to add a ticking time clock sound to symbolize her internal clock, which would start to hint towards the idea of time travel. They also believe that more needs to happen in my film opening than just a girl writing equations and talking to her boss, which I agree with. After discussing with my group, we agree we need to add in more little details that build context, like the people in my group suggested.
I was also recommended a couple of titles, mostly ones that consist of just one word, that could work with my film. For example, "The parallel" and "Illusion". I really liked how simple these titles were, because they did not give away the plot of the movie, but were intriguing.
However, the group left me questioning something really important that I need to consider in my film opening, which is the one thing I want to leave my audience with. When talking to them, I honestly realized that I could not think of any points that my story is purposing to leave the viewer with. This is definitely something I have to work on and figure out in the near future. Overall, it was a really insightful day and I enjoyed the feedback and help we all provided for each other.